..erm..
You killed trance sorry..
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its an older of my songs, made a while ago. it was perfect for my next vylkerie
rioross responds:
you killed me caring about what you say.
hmm, interesting
lol. i dont play bass myself so i cant really say anything bad about this but like.. all im going to say is this lacks originality,diversity,clarity and effort..
sorry man, but you really need to pratice on the guitar
try harder next time, dont give up and in time youll be better
rioross responds:
originality?! whats that supost to mean?
and what about "i cant really say anything bad about this"?
im not mad, just stick to what you say!
hmmm
Invest in some bass guitars lessons. Try putting more effort in before you submit next time
rioross responds:
witch will be the case in an upcoming song.
What is this excuse for music?
I agree with most of what WinTag said. The exceptio being that this is possibly made by a bass guitar hooked into a computer.
But wow, give your head a shake. Newgrounds isn't a dump like you may think it is.
rioross responds:
i dont think that it is a dump, i actually think it has grown to be sactuary of sorts.
What now?
Dude, who the hell do you think you're kidding? Do you think anyone is going to be stupid enough to believe this is a bass guitar? Why do you lie?
It has really started to piss me off now. The truth is that you fuck around for 2 minutes with a crappy sample/synth, I don't know what program you're using but I do know that you have no idea how to actually use it. And then you make up some stuff about how you were somewhere with your "equipment" and started "improvising".
Excuse my French, but fuck that. You have no musicality, therefore your audio isn't music, therefore you are making yourself look more and more stupid everytime you submit something. Stop it. If you really want to, invest time and energy.
rioross responds:
harsh. no, very harsh.
i cant say that i dont like it, but i can say that i do put time and effort into my work.
the last 5 submitions are just little "side servings" they do count for music yet aren't full pieces of work.
this is a base guitar, only i used NGM studios and, i am going to say it, equipment to modify it. and yes the guitar was and still is, my friends.
i will admit that only my first 9 songs didn't take much to make.
beleve me or not, i stick where i stand.
and for a last little note, if it is starting to piss you off, why come here anyway? did i ever ask you specificaly to come and listen to my work?
never the less, thanks for the review, i think.
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