another good song. however, a 3rd verse would have made this song. finishing on the hook kind of killed the energy.
Author Comments
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HERE ARE THE LYRICS:
Lyrics:
Hook:
I shot for the sky, Im stuck on the ground
Why do I try? I know Im gonna fall down
Thought I could Fly, So why did I drown?
I'll never know why, its coming down down down
Verse 1:
Through the coarse of my life i've had my ups and my downs
Certain points its alright, others like imma drown
Been to hell and back alone, searching for treasure
did I do it all in vein or was it all for the pleasure?
I guess if tears weren't sour how would smiling be sweet?
got the wind to my back, grass under my feet
I know my journey has a meaning even if its decietful
I can tell it by the way that i've been moving these people
its just a few of us now, but i wouldnt trade it for nothing
if I stumble its cool at least I did it because when
I was younger I was told that it isn't worth it attempting it
guess that fate is a temptress and I ended up tempted in
been deemed peoples hero, said I kept them alive
thats the kinda stuff that kept me from ending my life
through the bitterest nights, helps healing the scars
so even if i fall imma do it with love, cmon
Hook:
I shot for the sky, Im stuck on the ground
Why do I try? I know Im gonna fall down
Thought I could Fly, So why did I drown?
I'll never know why, its coming down down down
Verse 2:
took a shot at the stars, landed flat on my face
every day I still pray that imma grow a pair of wings
fly away and hide away from all the pain of yesterday
but it aint about the pain of falling its about how much you take
until you make it where you're going so you have it to show
dust off and brush off you cant fail if you dont give up and
keep it moving, take it to the road
you'll see it everywhere you go its something that you know
I never thought that I would be who I thought that I could be
I never thought I'd see the dream without falling asleep
picture being so close it could almost be touched
I always figured I would drop and it would end it uprupt
but after everything is said and done and happens alright
I guess that living is hard and thats a fact of this life
its mind over matter never matter over the mind
cuz even the wright brothers hit the ground once upon a time, cmon
Hook:
I shot for the sky, Im stuck on the ground
Why do I try? I know Im gonna fall down
Thought I could Fly, So why did I drown?
I'll never know why, its coming down down down
Real good
Hmm. This really isn't my style but you're a dope emcee so I'll try my best to remove any bias I might have.
Listening to this/reading through the lyrics I didn't really run into anything that really jarred me. That's not to say that I think that your message is insincere, but I've heard a lot of stuff very similar to this - in fact, I originally thought the hook was a sample. You bring a lot of energy to the mic which is a little unusual given the subject matter, there's also a bit of an offset between your style and the hook, and by the time it plays the third time around I feel like it's lost a bit of its power rather than having gained more.
That being said, you have a really tight flow and the lyrics are really consistent and each word seems to 'belong' where you put it.
emotional man. can feel it in the lyrics. Great beat choice. Awesome delivery. 10/10
~Rymix
This song deserves so much more, Its this song with meaning feelings and much more that makes me want to be in music, I wish i could record like that...Im jealous like not even joking, You have the voice and the flow, You have it all you need to be seen!
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4.77 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Jan 19, 2014
- 4:20 PM EST
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
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- 2.7 MB
- 2 min 56 sec
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