you have to label your work correctly. this is most certainly not house man. If I were you I'd make a drop around 1:30. the whole thing seems like one big build up. keep waiting and waiting and nothing ever happens

Spooky beginning than BAM! Fricken sick beat and crazy hi hats outta no where!! Good start. I can feel it building up getting ready for top hyper speed! Thunder and rain! Waiting.. Waiting.. Almost there i can feel it rising! Sound that came in at 2:04 hurt my ears. Gets better at 2:32. Still no drop though. 3:00 maybe there is a drop! (I've heard no bass yet) Well.. not every song needs bass and a drop. Good simple tune. Not the best but definitely not the worse.