Great job! Pretty epic, like you're climbing a mountain or taking an enemy base. This is not one of those "modern" songs that just go like Wub wub wub (no offense to dubstep lovers). Nice mix, I look forward to the rest of your music!

Beautiful and epic as usual, Ill be getting in contact with you again sometime in the future for music :)

oooooooOOOOOh... i love this soooong XD

You wasted no time in having this piece present itself like a climber would when sticking a flag on top of a mountain proclaiming to the rest of the world that upon such conquest, he has taken part of the mountain itself.
I like your orchestration. What strings do you use?

Although you mentioned that a better mixing is what it needs, the only problem I hear is that it seems to be peaking. Don't worry about the loudness of a piece. I'd rather raise my volume up loud then having to lower it, but that's a whole other argument that people like to have.

epic song! I'm jealous because I have no musical talent at all, but you do!