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Sickening (Freewrite)

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Nov 9, 2013 | 6:44 PM EST
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3 min 7 sec
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4.66 / 5.00

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This is my freewrite for this Saturday; thought id share..

Takes: about 5.. this is all one spit

Props to S-Rock on the beat!! Sick as always!

Just when I thought that id made a positive impact
I get impacted, by people twisting my words, I feel that
Ive been taken advantage of time and time again
but will it end? If so, how? They’ve done more than offend
/I’m on the fence thinking to further pursue or to quit
I keep thinking to continue, but I’m really getting sick of it
I started, I came up, hit the top, but then flopped
I thought I had it all, but hit the wall , the wave always stops
/a lot of times I thought id made it, id keep raving
Why save, live for the moment, then I hit the pavement
Foul statements were stated, then i got affidavits
Defamation cases, life went to shambles, I hate it
/I catered to only benefiting, I’m not shitting
I gambled, lost all my bets, but would keep on bidding
Its only fitting that it would end this way, Id lose
I chose the path that landed me here, I lost my own ruse
/Its no excuse, life got bad so I picked up the bottle
I’d buy and drink a 12a day, my stress was very coddled
I gave no devotion to my emotions, Id just sulk and wallow
Drowning in sea of alcohol all day, chug and swallow
/all day I followed the demon my shoulder as I got older
Then met the devil in the depths of it all, then said hold up
Peer pressure and all the endeavors, negative and positive
Had caused me to not pause, to rush through life and not live
/Now sitting here, still writing, still drinking some brews
Insides bruised, emotions minimal with nothing to loose
But at least reflecting where I went, didn’t end a life
Was never sucididal, just off a bit, needed some advice
/To turn my vice to a strength, not a hindrance
Now sitting here enduring it all, the past is past, im cleansed
Vented, still venting, its unrelenting
Shoot maybe im not cleansed, but been sentenced
/To a life of never ending tragedy It had to be me
, Im starting to see that my whole life’s been a smattering
Of batteries, constant verbal assaults and insults
Leaving me here dying inside with barely a fucking pulse
/I sat here writing, reflecting thinking of lessons
That I had learned, but I learned nothing, guess im destined
To a destiny of sad things, u think of it, that’s it
Like going to a Christmas with the family and getting no gifts
/I’m getting colder, more and more cynical
I saw a glimpse of good for minute , but now the good is minimal
On principal pal im no longing trying
Go with the flow, naw, I’m going to be defiant

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1PhrOzen11PhrOzen1

Rated 5 / 5 stars

what up, first of all, I love these rant types. Im always feelin your stuff an this is no different, a dark type, but you stay focused an flow with it so it doesn't seem like too much without a break. - its dope really.
'Vented, still venting, its unrelenting
Shoot maybe im not cleansed, but been sentenced'
definitely some strong feelings in this an a freewrite is always nice.
oh an yeah the beat is truly fresh,


KlazikNadi responds:

love this beat! glad ya enjoyed! this was def a good warm up session.. got a couple other tracks written write after doing this piece


trancedatlantictrancedatlantic

Rated 5 / 5 stars

klazik this is some great stuff. Its dark but I can totally relate.


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KlazikNadi responds:

lol.. yea this beat def put me in another place.. better to get it out than have the thoughts floating around in there haha.