Nice

I like this and I really like the drums in this I think you can push more drums into this with more of that and more beats and more build ups with the drums but you do have a good mix here and I was pretty impressed with the outcome and results of this I was very impressed with this and would love to hear more of your work and bring more focus on the drums like you did here anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more build up with the focus on drums

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This sounds good, smooth and atmospheric, a bit tense until the melody shifts around the minute. It turns into a happier melody than I'd expected, kinda wonder how it would've turned out if you kept the tension, but it sounds good. The drums are a trippy but nicely synced addition. Keep it going!

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