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HAVE SOME PIANO
Edit: Song length nearly doubled.
This is a very nice track. I particularly like the very muted tone on the piano that gradually sharpens as the piece goes on (although at the very beginning, it seemed to be clipping or distorting a bit--it could be just me, but you might want to look into that).
Overall, the track has a very dark, intense feel, and another important element supporting this is the super-punchy drums, especially the snare that kicks in at 1:11. When this snare starts appearing in more diverse forms like the buzz roll at 1:53 or the weird echoey variant at 1:58, it sounds really awesome.
Mixing piano with dark synthesized backgrounds like you do here can easily go wrong, but you seem to have handled it quite well: the instruments blend with each other perfectly.
As for what could be improved, there's not much I can come up with off the top of my head; I would agree that the fade out is a bit strange, especially since you end the piece for real in the middle of it. More supporting instruments, or even an additional melodic one, would serve the piece well, and help make that dark atmosphere richer.
In short: nice use of piano, excellent drum patterns & tone, cool atmosphere, and no major complaints. Great job!
But why eggs?
What, you don't like eggs?
Fixed the ending :)
I can only asume that this is the product of our recent conversation? :D
i like eggs too! lol, really good sounding track. love the feeling it gives on pumping along to a tempo, drives the mind
Really nice piano and great track. altough I would say it's more DnB like then Trance like.
also I've got the feeling the bass needs some more mastering and It does need a proper ending. That means no fade out. also add some more high notes for example with hihat's to the track that would really give it a bit of extra.
keep it going
Well it's supposed to be a little darker, so I kind of wanted to avoid using a bunch of hi-hats and high notes. I also don't think it's fast enough to be DnB. I agree about the ending though.
Thanks for the review :D
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