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Yeah it's pretty simple but it's one of my first compositions, so I'll keep at it!
I found it very beautiful, the stagered feeling of being lost of ink owning what's about to happen next. It gives a very enigmatic feel and I love it, great job:D
I found your post on the forum, and I'm in the same boat as you--new here to NG.
About the piece, well, there is enough there for me to be interested in hearing more.
I like that the piece doesn't totally present itself lazily in its character.
Is it a waltz? The only criticism I can give you is the block chords in the left hand, but if it is indeed a waltz, then the bass needs to be more varied. Perhaps it could be more interesting if you tried some kind of counter point there. For example: you have D-flat minor being played repetitively in the same root position. Change it up and that would improve your piece dramatically and sound more professional without losing the simplicity in this.
Overall, not bad, and I'm intrigued to hear more.
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