Yas!!! This sounds epic, and along with what kkots said, a little ambient into a build up in the build beginning before the juicy part would be coolio. Eeeeee
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I'm uploading the WIP, because I don't know if I'll ever finish the track.
DESHIEL responds:
I'll go find the track sheet geez :D
Man, this song is a real cocktease... Right before eargasm, song stops :(
DESHIEL responds:
hmm two more reviews like this and I will make this track my top priority :D
FINISH THE TRACK, MY EARS NEEEEEED MOOOOOORRRRRE!!!
DESHIEL responds:
I'm considering it. :)
FINISH IT. FINISH IT NAO.
pls.
Excellent work with the melody! I can see that it is written in a particular musical key! Did you study music theory or something? This is, like, your first track, where notes do not contradict each other.
It starts a bit too... a bit too immediately... kind of straight away, like a punch into the face. Maybe you should make a short beginning "ambient"-like part or something.
Flows nicely and has really awesome variety. Why? Why not finish it?? Hgh..
DESHIEL responds:
Never studied it, but sometimes I get some tips from the people who do.
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