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DivoFST

2013-09-17 11:09:39

I like the intro to the song, feels pretty faithful to the first song of the EP and sets a pretty good mood to what comes next.
I thing the main melody is just too loud in my opinion and sounds a bit cheesy.
The guitar do fit well only fading in the background but i find myself wondering if the song would not benefit from them becoming more prominent.
The guitar solo riff is pretty sweet but is drowned in the middle of the mix, specially by the loud cheesy synth.

LemonCrush responds:

This is also my least favorite song out of the four. I debated whether or not to include it. It's one of THOSE songs. In the end I decided to keep it, just because.

I've really been trying to expand my horizons outside of being "just a guitarist" and moving into other types of instumentation and such, and this was one of the first songs form that experimentation, so it isn't perfect. It was just good enough to include, or so I thought lol

sorohanro

2013-09-16 20:50:38

In my headphones, the main lead/ melody is so loud that overpowers everything else. I would make the drums a bit "fatter", back off with the lead and pad a bit, make the guitar stereo (panning or split the frequencies or a ping-pong delay).
Not a bad composition.

LemonCrush responds:

Something, I noticed last time I uploaded stuff here...NG's player, I think, does something to the sound of certain frequencies. It might be an mp3 thing or something, but my stuff almost always sounds different on NG. Sometimes more noticable than others