Wow... just... yeah, wow. Ok, review time.
Pros: Did I mention wow? Yeah, I was surprised the lyrics added a great deal to your song. Props to Edobean's vocals and lyrics. For a moment, I thought I was listening to a full band that I'd hear on the radio stations. Evanescence comes to mind in fact. Melody too is top notch as always. Never ceases to amaze me you make all this music by yourself. If I hadn't been following your music for a long time, I'd swear you actually have a full band behind you in these songs.
Cons: Several points the vocals were a little unclear (particularly around the parts where her lyrics speed up and tone changes), but it's a trade-off because when the vocals WERE clear, the melody was a little covered up.
Other: Overall, a spectacular piece. In terms of overall enjoyment, I'd say I prefer your Dark Star piece, but only by a very slight margin. As always, keep up the good work, your stuff is completely awesome.