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This is an attempt at making a soundtrack for an upcoming game named "Clocked", but got declined because it had too much of a club-feel, etc. which I kinda do understand, since it's meant for a game, and games require a catchy/progressive rhythm that fits the atmosphere ingame.
A good example is the soundtrack to "Ace Attorney". :)
But I take this as constructive critism, and will push myself to make more catchy/progressive rhythms in the future!
Link to song: https://soundcloud.com/thepal/clocked-main-theme
Well I am enjoying the feel of this piece quite well. At 0:33 everything kinda became muddied together, and I think you could work on your note velocities around there. The out of tune part at 1:19 is more annoying and in my opinion doesn't add much to the song.
Overall though I still like this song, and it loops quite well.
I don't know if I agree with you at the 0:33 part, and what are you getting at, the drums here or the sine rhythm? And if it would be anything, I'd believe it would be a mastering problem.
And at the 1:19. That's just up to the part where the lead from "A Handy Lass" comes up, do you mean the bell, or the lead?
Just send me an PM with your reply, please. :)
Though, Thanks alot for coming with a thoughtful review!
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