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Aug 11, 2013 | 2:23 PM EDT
File Info
3.7 MB
2 min 41 sec
4.00 / 5.00

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Rated 4.00 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
336 Plays | 16 Downloads
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Author Comments

Back where I belong
but I don't feel near as strong
they say everything I do is wrong

I feel lonely
I want this to end
you don't know me
you've never been my friend

do you recall all the times we spent?
saying we'd go but we never went
we let it all fall by the side
I can't stand the thought
I'd rather die

I cant lose you now
I wont lose you now
I wont let you go
and I know that you know what I know

I don't think I cant make this stop
It just goes on and on and on
and on and on and on and on
on and on.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

I like the lyrics but the presentation of voice provides disingenuous delivery for me. The effect on the voice is detracting (for me) and would be much more interesting (I think) if you recorded your own background vocals and layered them with your primary vocals.
Of course, I'm not entirely sure what the goal was here. Perhaps you met your personal goal. The track beneath the voice is not helping it along or really accentuating in any way. This has the poential to be a short and sweet track. The melancholy is too strong, I feel like I just woke up to find my nose fell off.