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Thankyou for listening. My favorite part of the song is the ending. I've never done an ending like that before. I started this song a few weeks ago and forgot about it. I just finished it today.
I don't usually listen to dubstep songs
but it's this kind of dubstep that impresses me..
not a bunch of mixed up base here and there but a passionate one that tells a story...
this is amazing, man... I got tears listening to this.. :*D
Thankyou for the review!
Piano as an intro is quite ok, sure I had tried to put on an equalizer in order to obtain a little brighter cleaner sound. The rather dark little over compressed.
Does the bass is ok, Kick drum hard but not quite the quality they can get by with a little help with Parametric equalizer and compressor. As in previous comment is synth
Sad dub step rather difficult considering BPM and theme. For me, it feels like you know what you want, but may not be what you want. But you are young you work hard with the music learning new things every day.
I can't help but feel disappointed with this song somewhat. It seems as if you took this too far in the direction of "Lost Forever", the last Dubstep song you produced. I know that the chord sequence and key are different, yet it has an element of being recycled to it.
The synths are way too generic for my taste, try experimenting with the fx channels, you can really change up the sounds a lot. I know that you like the way the synths sound, and I respect that, but wouldn't it be nice to reach out of your comfort zone once in a while? Your fans would certainly appreciate it.
As for reviewing the rest of the song, I really like the ambient clicking sound towards the end of the track! Reminds me of clickers from "The Last of Us".
As a standalone song, it's good. I can't help but wonder what could have been if you tried to do a few things different. That's why you're just falling short of the 4-5 stars. Also the kick and snare aren't balanced quite right, yet I know how painstaking the process is so I'll let you off. Good work as always, you keep getting better!
Till next time!
Thankyou for the review! I will try to make my synths less generic next time and I'll also try not to let it sound like "Lost Forever".
you really need to work on your synths man. most of them sound kinda generic and boring.
also, the kick should be softer than the snare in terms of volume. you really gotta look out for balance.
work on your atmosphere as well. fiddle with the reverb /delay effects and see what you can come up with.
keep at it. you'll eventually get 5 stars from me. ;)
Thankyou for the review!
I will remember this for my next song.
In my last dubstep song i spent an hour alone on balancing the kick and snare and It was so frustrating that I didn't want to do it again this time. I made a mistake and should have done that again.
A brilliant piece, this is my favorite kind of dubstep. It's chilled, but with a light emotional punch, a great tune and the piano sounds are spot on. I'm not sure what that clicking sound is towards the end, but i like it.
Overall, i think this is absolutely fantastic, and i'll checking out your other stuff.
Im glad you enjoyed the song! :)
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