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I've been sitting on this one for soooooo long. I started it almost a year ago, and finally touched up and decided to upload. It's not strictly trance, but close enough.
Best listened to at max volume :D
Very nice piece! Definitely enhanced my morning!~
Well the song started off pretty good. I'm a fan for deep prog trance that isn't so repetitive. I think the clap like percussion could be a bit more crisp, however, I enjoy the kick. Not a big fan of how you progressed your drums to some kind of bongo like drums.
Good use of filter modulations on the lead instrument.
1:01 didn't like this part as much as the 1st part. It sounds like a cliche buildup. 1:33 was not what I expected for a climax. Sidechain is not enough to be considered a climax. I will compliment you on the fx and drop moments here. Piano composition is not that catchy, but I like the piano as a instrument so average out to good.
2:19 good transition. Unfortunately, I'm going to have to knock you down on that fuzzy lead. You know that sounds generic. It can easily be EQ modified to sound may better. I hear alot of booms around 2:34. Was that intentional? I felt it interrupted the beat too much. Nice idea though. Composition is nothing special here. Is this the part where you spent the least time in? It started so well, but everything feels like that "I heard it before but with better instruments" moment.
4:07 interesting transition. I think you should have ended with a bang and then delay the next section for a 2 second count. (eg. 4:13 part)
So same composition as earlier in the song. Definitely you spent more time here than around the 2:00 min part.
4:59 Well that is a long conclusion. Choir perhaps could use more presence. Nice finish with the piano.
Overall I can see you spent more time at certain sections of your song and disregarded particular areas. This is quite common for EVERYONE. Yes, it may have been a year, but you could have completely deleted certain areas of your song as those parts quickly destroyed the emotional feel.
Oh, I am listening to your song with Beat studio headseats so I can pick out every sound you intended quiet well. 5/5 review + vote.
Bye for now
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