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3 min 2 sec
4.21 / 5.00

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Rated 4.21 / 5 stars
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This is the theme of Logos, the supreme engineer.



Rated 5 / 5 stars July 12, 2013

You have a very original style. Love this. I'm not shure about the drum though. It's kind of accoustic but sound electronic. Maybe if you vary each hit to different level might be more interesting. Most drummer don't hit the snare and the bass drum twice the same. Excellent composition though.

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Rated 4 / 5 stars July 11, 2013

You have outstanding chord work. When the drums kick in, this sounds like one of the gummi ship themes from Kingdom Hearts II -- specifically Cloudchasers. The rhythm is solid, and so are those high piano notes. The chords stood out the most to me. <3

What would likely work is if you introduced a counter-melody somewhere in the piece. A warm pad perhaps? Like the previous piece I reviewed, this one doesn't have too much in the way of mids, and some more would be appreciated.

The piano works well as a bass line around 1:08, but not all the time. 1:08 is a sort of breakdown, and the piano as a bass line works beautifully there. It did give off a bit of a Kirby's Epic Yarn feel. But because there are not enough mids and there aren't enough of the lowest frequencies, an electric bass perhaps in the other sections? Also, like the reviewer below me has pointed out, the kick is quite sharp, but also a bit too high.

1:45 REALLY SOUNDS like something Yoko Shimomura would do, with the synth kicking in. When I first heard it I was thinking it was a violin... then I listened carefully. Heheh! ^_^

This piece was quite well mixed, and I don't think I notice any problems with regards to mixing except for the missing frequencies I mentioned earlier.

I enjoyed this piece. All the best for the ADM auditions!


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Blacklawn responds:

Thank you. It's good to know I'm improving. I'll see what I can do about the mids later, and perhaps add a bass without interfering with the piano.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 11, 2013

nice, i thought some breaks would eventually start. Could use some fills in more quiet areas in the song and in general could use more than just a couple instruments. It is composed nicely but even in drums its just the same hat, kick and snare, you know what I means? I think you could have used different type of drums though and some better dfelay/reverb. Also chords are kinda hard to follow , like at 2:35.. I think it's a bit messed up. Even the time signature might be messed up a bit.

But all in all, I appreciate the effort man. you set the m ood pretty well for the Logos, the supreme engineer.

Blacklawn responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'll try to fix any issues later XD

Don't see anything wrong with the time signature, though...