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Date
07/10/2013
File Info
Song
6.6 MB
2 min 54 sec
Score
4.45 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.45 / 5 stars
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392 Plays | 37 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - General Rock
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Author Comments

Lyrics:
Your gaze
breaks
in
into me
hold off on the
drink
these arms can hold you in
held you in arm
for more than
I could take
hold off
on the drink
these arms can hold you in
no more
black drunk nights
no bruises
no fights tonight
You slip from my embrace
tonight
the toxin
pulls you in...

Reviews


8-bitheroes8-bitheroes

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 18, 2013

Overall pretty good, it has quite a dreamy/sleepy feel to it. The outro has a good contrast to the rest of the song. The only thing i would say is the effect you used on the vocals reverb or delay maybe? seemed a bit much at times. R4R


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Micahman5000 responds:

It's a story of drunken plight haha, so the woozy sounds hopefully compliment that well. Thank you - I used a ringshifter and guitar amp on the vox in the chorus ("hold off") section... I may consider dialing that down. Thought it sounded nifty, but I realize it saps a bit of clarity and it can be used effectively without the Ringshifter delay and Spring Verb hitting too hard. Thanks for the review and suggestions :3


eatmeatleeteatmeatleet

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 14, 2013

:)))))))))))


Micahman5000 responds:

:3:3:3:3:3:3:3 thanks for the glowing review and smiley face, meng.