This is quirky, fun to listen to. The sound effects, the 8-bit, it sounds so well done. The piece kinda reminds me of a video game version of Mr Bombastic.... whether it rubs me the wrong way, or not, is immaterial, because it's at least left me something to remember.
Right off the bat I feel the vocals are lacking precision. A bit off timing in places, and to my ears, sounds a bit nervous in some places. Perhaps it was intended to be sung in the same volume and predominantly the same pitch throughout, but I find a bit more expression is warranted in places like "Holy **** Tom's already a robot!" -- hip-hop is not my genre, but I do know one thing about it: good hip-hop artists have no holds barred with expression. Dynamics, manner of speech, tone...
The music is alright, I suppose -- I have no complaints with regards to mixing.
Fun song, vocals could use some oomph. For the record, I listened for the most part without looking at the lyrics, and it was trippy. Had me smiling a bit.
8/10.