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(this is my first time doing vocals)


Lyrics:

No one seems to get

what comes around goes around.

The Lies, Deception,

The auto conception.


Karma's a Bitch, yeah,

but not as much as you.

You scare my friends away,

yeah you scare them all away


Nobody likes you

I wish you'd leave

Your religious aspects

are twisted and sick


You put God in a bottle,

and hid him away.

There's something wrong with you,

yeah there's something wrong with you

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Hmm...I like some of the riffs, and the sound is pretty good overall. Is that EZDrummer? The only problem is that the lyrics are...a touch unpolished to put it mildly. There's some good word-painting, but it doesn't actually make anything clear beyond "You lie, and have weird religious thoughts, there's something wrong with you, and I don't like you." As a listener, I want to know how she put god in a bottle...what she lied about...how she scared your friends away. What's it mean? What's it say about life? What's it say about God? What the heck is auto conception?!?Find words to answer those questions and the song would be awesome.

But...you probably wrote this to put in song about someone who pissed you off. So, the song did its job. So, don't pay any attention to me anyways.

RawGreen responds:

It's Fruityloop's FPC, I use the Gretch Full preset. If you look under Scores and then FPC drumloops, there's roughly 1700 different midi files. They're well organized but some of them will need a little bit of TLC to fit your song's needs.

Thanks a lot for the insight on the vocals! I'll be sure to make lots of notes next time to be sure I'm delivering an understandable message to the audience.
I always appreciate any feedback!

Just to clarify this song was made as a gift for my friend, something to speak for him about his frustrations. He was in a relationship with a woman who's mother went around trying to destroy his life because his face resembled her ex-husband's, and used her religion to justify her actions.

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Uploaded
Jul 8, 2013
11:48 PM EDT
Genre
General Rock
File Info
Song
5.2 MB
2 min 17 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.