Score: 9

"pleasant"

by: ArienV

date: May 14, 2008

You got a good theme on your hands here.
Am I correct in assuming this is done in "Reason"?
I recognise that twangy piano sample. It's a shame the piano samples
don't sound better! I actually found the nn-19 piano samples sounded better,
I previously ignored the nn-19. I'm not sure about that whistley thing in the middle, it's kinda whiney. Overall suitable theme and nice development. =)

Score: 10

"Ahhhh!"

by: myst-rune

date: February 17, 2008

Amazing. Does your keyboard have traditional piano key pressure or is it loose-goosey like most? I could never play that way on the latter! The piano was simple, well played, and inspiring. You could almost do with just the piano and nothing more. But I'm probably just reiterating what others have already said so let's wrap this up with a...
Wonderful~!

Score: 10

"awsome work sir"

by: Grango-boy

date: October 1, 2007

sir, this is great work.. your pharao one i loved alot, abd this, this seems to be a peacful song, its so happy!

Score: 10

"Talent!"

by: cycerin

date: July 15, 2006

I can't believe that nobody has used this for their flash yet. Damn. It's so extremely well made, sounds like something out of a hollywood soundtrack. It's a bit cheesy but that doesn't matter when it's this well put together, it almost adds to the greatness. The piano is just awesome. Incredible. Keep up the awesome work mate. :D

Score: 9

"Awesome"

by: MaestroSegments

date: July 15, 2006

Hello DavidOrr

Lets begin our review by analysing mood and atmosphere.

heh, there is really not much to analyse, its a very happy, love torn song. I swear to god, the first three notes made me think of "You are my Sunshine!"

A very hopeful, bright future feel comes from this piece. Yet the image I get from it is quite strange. I an old man sitting on a bench, in Autamn, leaves falling in great numbers, in a park somewhere. The birds are leaving, people on bikes just going by him. He smiles, his love for this spot, this time is great, and unfaltering.

A great image.

Lets talk a bit about instruments.

Great work on that piano, I mean come on, you seem to play pretty damn well. Sets the mood right away. I also like the level of reverb going on here, enough to really make it special, but not enough to wash out the rest of the instruments.

I think those spic strings should be abit louder.

I also feel the flute was a tad bit overpowering. I like the idea of strings and flute playing the same melody, makes for a neat sound, though I can't help wondering how it would if you had it play a counter melody. When that flute goes on by itself, I feel it makes itself really heard.

You lost some points in clarity, because I had to really strain to hear those strings in the background, didn't even realize it until the third time I listened to the song.

Did you reverb that flute like a madman? I really like it, but I think you may have gone a little overboard ;).

I have nothing to add or remove from this song DavidOrr, very powerful stuff. I would like your feedback on my piece, I think you have a great understanding of music.

Keep them coming DavidOrr, I know you will go wherever you want to, and beyond that.