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Jun 20, 2013 | 3:10 PM EDT
File Info
Song
8.3 MB
3 min 37 sec
Score
4.63 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.63 / 5 stars
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2,299 Plays | 93 Downloads
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal
Tags:
collab
screaming
vocals
breakdown

Author Comments

*Edit* I re-uploaded it with my singing parts turned down . . to save you the torture haha

Vocals over LucaSignorelli's instrumentals.
Thanks to him for letting me use his music for practice again!!
Original is here
soundcloud.com/lucasignor elli/new-song-riff-ideas

I used a lot more layering than past songs, I'm not so sure how to feel about it at the moment.
Definately need to work on my vocals still haha but I'm happy with them.

Criticisms and tips GREATLY APPRECIATED!

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Ancient weapons
in form of memory.
Knowledge I've gained
from the great men before me.

But nothing could prepare me,
it didn't matter that I was strong.
The enemy I didn't know
knew my weaknesses all along.

Bypass my armor
and strike straight for my heart.
Battle theory out the window,
my mind's been picked apart.

This betrayal, this poison
I struggle to recover.
I was foolish to believe,
we cared for one another.

Down to the ground I go,
guess that it goes to show.
I'm not invincible.
Down in the dirt I wallow,
ego reduced to zero.
You smile and disappear.

I never could guess that you
would be this heartless, be this vicious.
I guess you really can't trust beauty.
This time i think I'll let the hate consume me.

Helpless, weak, my hands are tied.
Today my inner fire died.
There was a time when I counted myself as blessed.
But now I'm staring down at the knife in my chest.

You held me up for so long,
I forgot how to stand up on my own.
I'll learn to, learn to live again.

Stay the fuck away from meeeeee =D

Reviews


bipolarmunkeybipolarmunkey

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

turn the vocals back up please! great music, great lyrics, great vocals, just need more in the mix. Loving it though!



blanchonblanchon

Rated 5 / 5 stars

my throat aches for you, man ! Can't belive that growl is even possible ! Good job for that vocal work !

Wait, it's a vocal interpretation from an instrumental song !? DAMN ! both lyrics and instrumental fits perfectly together, I am really damn surprised !

I'm so gonna look for more of your work, these vocals sounds interesting ... =]


People find this review helpful!
PhallicNinja responds:

Haha It took LOTS of practice. My steering wheel has been screamed at it for hours and hours and hours till I got the technique down.

Thanks for the review, man!~
Everything I've done is over an existing instrumental track, as I don't play any instruments.


VurchooVurchoo

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very nice! Thought the flow & rhythm were great; Favorite part was from "I could never guess..." to "...Knife in my chest"....and then the "Stay the f*ck away from me" part too!


PhallicNinja responds:

Haha thanks! "Stay the fuck away from me" was fun to record lol
My face felt like it was gonna pop from the strain XD


PirateCrabPirateCrab

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Vocals feel very reminiscient of Disturbed's style of screaming and growling. Love it! Guitar has got such a brutal chug too, mmmmmm.

My ears are picking up this kind of muddy sound from the bass however, but that's just me being nitpicky. Ace work!


PhallicNinja responds:

Thanks! If you like the instrumentals, check out LucaSignorelli's SoundCloud page! He's got tons more, and he even does full album covers on his Youtube page!


Bad-Man-IncorporatedBad-Man-Incorporated

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Sick man, I really dig that drudging driving tempo. Growls were killer. They layered voices were fucking rad. This song lands on my IPOD. Wicked, dude.


PhallicNinja responds:

Awesome! Good reviews from you mean a lot! Thanks for taking the time to listen and judge ]=]=]