I like this
So I really like this one it has some nice sound was very soft and was hoping for more of a build up but besides that this was really a nice tune you have created here for us all.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added build up.
~X~
This piece is one of my more atmospheric pieces and probably quite sorrowful too, however it's one that I wanted to keep quite short. Usually I like to perform vocals in my compositions, but somehow this piece in my opinion just didn't call for vocals.
Hope everyone is well!
I like this
So I really like this one it has some nice sound was very soft and was hoping for more of a build up but besides that this was really a nice tune you have created here for us all.
~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added build up.
~X~
first song that made me shed a tear of happiness sorrow and peace thank you very much
Thank you! :)
Wow this is really great! I love that piano. :)
Thank you very much! :)
Ahhh....The piano in this is so incredibly beautiful. There is nothing quite like high, atmospheric piano parts, and the parallel fourths added a likeable color. The synth pad contributed a very fitting warmth.
I do wish that this was longer. I can imagine a beautiful cello line singing over the top in the next part, along with some subtle harp and violin harmonics for a chilling effect... But this is your song, not mine. :)
You should try more like this. I'd love to hear you make another piece in this style but with vocals sung on pure vowels with a healthy dose of reverb serving as a sort of organic pad. Not overbearing, but ethereal and lush. I love hearing the voice used as If it were an instrument.
Keep it up!
You've given me a lot of nice ideas for another song!! Thank you Trevor. All the best :)
I like the mood at the beginning and the instruments. The melody is good, too, but this piece ends way too suddenly. I think you should do more with it! I was waiting the whole 90 seconds for that moment when it transitions from ominous to epic, but that moment never came. Please continue working on this. It has potential. ;)
For me, the piece represents pretty much exactly that. The moment of 'epic' simply doesn't come. A feeling of loneliness, being lost. 'Futility' as I named it. I take your comments on board! Thank you :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.