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Catching a breath,
Downing all the meth;
Coming out of ethics,
Coming out of methods.
Writing my name on the walls,
Running down the halls;
Chasing down these dreams,
Everything is not what it seems.
A woman's voice is heard afar,
I feel around, but it's too dark;
Getting caught in all the cross-fire,
Shadows dragging me down to be their sire.
Chambers of my mechanical heart,
I cannot look for a place to start;
The echoes of my mind are slipping,
I must go now, the clock is ticking.
I am enjoyed this loop, but felt like the beginning(where it begins to loop back) could cut to a higher pitch. I feel like it dropping to that point signals the loop too much.
But, other than that, the actual looping melody is good. Has its fair share of idle moments and vibrate beats. A forty-four second loop is pretty long, or at least what I am used to.
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That's nice to know from a critic's perspective. :)
getting better every day. reminds me of some of aphex twin's stuff.
would love to hear vocals on this
I've been listening to Aphex Twin's Polynomial C, haha!
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