Has potential, but needs to be speeded up and less choppy. Smooth it out a bit. 1:50 is better, but still needs some improvement. Good start!
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>take out space<
Has potential, but needs to be speeded up and less choppy. Smooth it out a bit. 1:50 is better, but still needs some improvement. Good start!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.