Sound: Decent mixing over all, the bass ends could use some work.
Composition: Decent structure, however the song did start sounding repetitive near the end. However I do love your use of sounds. It is deliciously grungy and dark.
Fit to Art: Here's where I think your song lacks. As a standalong song, it works wonderful. However paired with the art, I think it lacks in conveying the feel of the robot/cyborg depicted within the art.
Originality: Nothing too new here, actually kind of sounds like another DnB type piece.
Ending thoughts: A nice stand alone track, maybe less repetition though.