It's definitely original, but in this particular case, it really doesn't help.
It honestly sounds too experimental. You may be doing something different, but everything feels too mashed and out of key a little. Organized in its randomness (but not in a good way like glitch music). It's even too weird to call it glitchstep.
You may be on to something, but you're far from there.
I'm sorry I wasn't able to word it well; it is hard to describe this piece.
Sincerely,
Reali-tGlitch