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My first lyrical! This was really hard to make, and a good break from Sonic, hope you like

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Average Score: 8.3 / 10

Score: 7

"Anoying Voice"

by: MegaGold

date: August 3, 2006

I guess it was okay, good piano riffs, but the voice was really anoying. Could have got better vocals. Or at least try to get better vocals. Another thing about the voice was that I couldn't understand anything coming out of it. I think I heard the word it a couple times but that is about it.

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Score: 10

"Nice one."

by: avl1991

date: June 21, 2006

Not too bad, although at a couple of points, the vioce seemed a bit, erm, flat? Like there was not that much emothion in it. Meh... I dont know. Lol. Anyway, for your first lyrical, not bad! Keep it up!

Now aside from those 2 songs i asked you to do on MSN Messenger, I would you to mak a "Stetich" version of Sonic 3d Blast Boss theme and Sonic 3d Blast Final Boss theme under ONE condition. YOU PUT ALL YOU CAN INTO THIS. THIS IS MY FAVORIT SONG, AND BY THE SOUND OF YOUR REMIXES, I WANT THIS TO BE THE KING OFF ALL SONIC REMIXES (if possible) ON NG.COM!!! If you can do it, good luck. I dont want this song to be killed. This is my favorite Boss theme from Sonic.

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OK. Can do, but I have a lot of haters out there in NG, a bunch of jerks wont leave me alone, so it probably wont be the best on NG, but I can give it my all.

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Score: 8

"Sorry but not your best."

by: Rythim-Man

date: June 21, 2006

It's your first lyrical posted, so get ready for some criticizm.

Ok, first off, something has to be done to make the voice clearer yet still mix in well with the instruments. Try experimenting with adding bass or treble and reverbs and other effects... or you could simply lower the instrumentals a tad smudgit lol. Some moments of it become plain too. I love the idea of the instrumental break but it needs to be a tad more flashy at some points.

I love this song though, especially the chorus "I'm a victim of Love". The echo was very nice. You need to make even the echo have Rhythm, which you've done so that's no problem with you. The disortion caused by the echo only makes the song more exciting. I love the voice (is it yours?). It has emotion and it's a nice tenor. A couple of notes seemed out of tune but I have a bad tuning ear anyway so I may be wrong.

I'm downloading this song. Thanks for putting it up here!

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Lol.

Yes, the voice is me. I did everything in this one. Glad you like

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