I like it. E-mail me any time you would like a review. I use fruityloops, but could still help with direction. I would start with some of that deeper stuff in the intro then you speed it up into a run in drop. Thats how a DandB bass run would be like. It sounds good, but just some change ups, and leveling could be added. Check out some of my stuff and let me know what you think if you want!