Wicked song. Spectacular...
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Song: "Reveal"
Album: "Of Men and Angels"
Music composed digitally by George R. Powell
Lyrics written and vocals performed by George R. Powell
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It all started with the revelation
that Love could be found in a world of sinners
and that the hearts of my brethren
were frozen over with their own righteousness
Reveal to me the Truth I don't want to know
It's eating me like the bitter kiss of snow
I understand I don't know what I'm asking for
But I just can't live in this beautiful lie anymore
My world comes down, pieces of the sky they shatter at my feet
The pain burns now, on my knees as it blazes over me
Again...what a nice song man! Keep it up.
My favourite track of the 3 you just posted... reminds me a bit of Hoobastank.
Some comments... hope you won't mind:
-- The "silent screams" behind "reveal to me" and "it's eating me" doesn't help, IMO. Some harmonic vocals or even an echo-ish effect could have been better.
-- The piano coming in at 3:00 felt a bit out of place. It's too casual/soft compared to all the other elements of the song.
-- You could have packed more punch in the "Haaa---ahhhh"'s starting at 2:34 by using your "real" voice rather than your falsetto. It's a really high register but you showed you could get up there in the chorus. Just belt it out, man!
But that's just small nitpicky things, and the song overall is fantastic. I still prefer your cinematic orchestral things though :)
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- 5 min 14 sec
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