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Apr 26, 2013 | 7:07 PM EDT
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4.5 MB
1 min 58 sec
4.55 / 5.00

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Rated 4.55 / 5 stars
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3,142 Plays | 73 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Olskool

Author Comments

Here's something I wrote and recorded on a whim, with this beat as inspiration and background: /audio/listen/532445

Music/mixing (mostly) by Ajiman, lyrics/vocals by me. I know the recording quality isn't perfect, blame mic/sound-card/computer/v acuum cleaner/unclothed walls/other unforeseeable disturbance.

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Would you want to live in a world
Where there's nothing but hate
Nothing more than violence on the videotapes
Nothing more than cries
When you close the blinds
Creeping up into dark skies

Say you don't mind cause you live for the trouble
You live with a will to break out of your bubble
To be somebody and do you good
But dude you misunderstood, yeah

Would you want to live in a world
Where there's nothing but hate?
Would you want to live in a world
Where there's nothing but violence on the videotapes?
Nothing more than cries
When you close the blinds
A raging fire creeping up into dark skies, yeah

I never figured out what dreaming means either
Look in the news but there you only see Bieber
And bloody murder and a crowd of girl fans
And rifles, trifles and syphilis oh man
It's all ablaze, the world is filled with rage
Image after image, page after page
People start their days with a cup of tea
And silence, and a paper filled with violence

If I had one wish
I would wish for... bliss

I don't want to live this! I want bliss!

I don't want to live this! I want bliss!

I don't want to live in a world
Where there's nothing but hate!
I don't want to live in a world
Where's there nothing but violence, on the videotapes!
Nothing more than cries!
When I close my blinds!
Nobody does nothing for nothing!
Nobody's kind to be kind!

(put on loop and repeat thirty-seven times minimum)
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All feedback much appreciated!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

excellent message! the song is killer old school!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very nice composition, and arrangement.

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not normally my kind of music, but this song actually has very interesting lyrics. This has definitely a more of an old school rap feel. I prefer this to new rap most definitely, as I can actually understand it! I dunno that is my opinion. Anyway! I like your voice its very suited for this type of music, and you put great emotion into the song. The production here isn't horrible, but you definitely could benefit from a condenser mic on the vocal side. I noticed a bit of clipping on some of vocal bits. That is just nitpicking though. Good mix and good song.

Nice Job.

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah, the recording quality is a bit lacking. If I ever do get a new mic I'll really dive into my musical strains. Thanks for the review!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Your Song Fresh.....10 out of 10,keep up the good work man!

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks man!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Man, Very Nice lyrics, good flow, a little Gorillaz-like sound there. Awesome

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad you liked it!