Apologies
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- guitar
- machine
- apologies
- spoonukem
Author Comments
This is a sort of just "getting some things off my chest" kind of track.
Lyrics...
It is so hard to believe
That everything I've done was for you
Trapped in my own paranoia
Hearing things that were never said
I really can't believe
This hell I've put us through
I hope that you will
Only accept my apologies
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Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 19, 2013
I have a really good idea. Sing the verse in the beginning, then sing it again at the last part so you can work with the momentum of this voice. To me this is begging for some raspy screaming, like maximum mode. Because the instruments are doing the same. I love the drums alot. Sounds kinda slipknot influenced(I know, GHeEY) the vocals really really kill the track. Murders it in fact. In a bad way. But I can definitely see some huge potential in this song alone. If its your first time singing or whatever, I wouldn't try to write so many notes for the vocals. Keep it at a minimum until your confident you can nail the complexity of switching vocal keys every bar. Don't give up! I wanna hear more songs with lyrics, cause its got some huge potential. Your instruments were used really well, btw, and the progression was very natural.
Thanks, it means a lot to me when I get responses like this. I think as far as having vocals, I just had to have them in the song for myself. Regardless, of my inability to sing 'well'. Hopefully, I'll learn for I can better them along the way. Thanks again! :)
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 18, 2013
The vocals are the only thing making this not as good as it could be. I think all you need are some voice lessons. Other than that, almost like a Nine Inch Nails song. VERY GOOD.
Thank you, I know my pitch control and vibrato isn't as good as it could be... (I recently just started singing) but I make do with what I can do... so I'm happy with the results. :)