This intro needs improvement, but the body of it contains elements I really like, unpolished as they are. It's been sitting on my desktop for over a month now collecting digital dust, so why not share?
Wow amazing
Wow this was amazing this is one that I insta faved because its just a beautiful song here really great flavour on this one and it does have that video game feel about but then you make it your own style aswell so really nice work, I love the quality and mixture you have in this
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Nice mixture here no changes needed.
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The melody is pretty good, and it's catchy and all, but I think the instruments are a little too penetrating. I like the structure and style of it, though. 1:14 is very funky- definitely a favorite part of mine. Your transitions were good and it loops pretty well. I just think you should be careful about where you make certain instruments stand out. You should keep working on it, but good start. ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
SmallArmsMusic 
