I really like the intro, very slow song, quite a hypnotic melody.. it's like soundtrack to a dream or something.

This song is waaay too weenie for me, I could try to shrink my age and listen to this song for whole day. Very good mixing. I love the balanced panning. Complains? Too repetitive. You could shorten each part of this song to half. 5 minutes are quite long. Other problem is off chord. Notice, not off-note *wink*. The part near ending is quite plain, you could add a build up with a bit more melodic way. Were you being lazy? Well, when I make song that longer than 3 min, I have the same problem :/. So keep it short.

I give you 4 for the good mixing. Keep it up. And DON'T get into flamewar.

interesting work

Love the intro, its quite atmospheric and the panning in there is awesome, the percussion panning really stands out.
I think you pushed the intro a bit to far, although it has an excellent first effect it gets old since it varies very little and lasts close to a minute.
Love how the song progresses, but once again i feel you push the section too far without much variation.
The lead solo guitar is a bit to loud in some parts of the song and i personally kinda dislike the tone.
Overall this is a nice song, i love some sections and how you handle panning, very trippy.
I think the main problem with this song is the forced duration, turning this into a 3:30 song and cutting the repetition would be a huge improvement.
Good job Mockoff, you kinda remind me of my style!

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