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Uploaded
Apr 5, 2013 | 7:44 PM EDT
File Info
Song
12.5 MB
5 min 29 sec
Score
4.00 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.00 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
399 Plays | 18 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - House
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Author Comments

After a few months of learning with FL Studio i've finally managed to produce my first track. Please rate and leave a comment!

-Alohha

Reviews


StaticBluStaticBlu

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good effort in this song, but there a couple of things that could use improvement.
One is the buildup you have at the beginning of the track. It goes on for like a minute. You probably would have lost the interest your audience by then. You can cut that intro to 20-30 seconds and get to the point.
Another thing is that the whole track seems to stay in it's comfort zone and with all of that previous build up you have, we were expecting more of a kick to it. It just feels like you didn't take it to the max, the track just stayed where it felt like it belonged. Working with your octaves could help as well as a moving part to help move the track along.
Good effort. Congrats on producing your first track. Keep at it man!


Alohha responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Both of you guys! I'm still learning and i will continue too. :)


Cross666Cross666

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Too much build-up for my tastes, I find myself trying to find the soul of your song in this track. Production quality is good man, enough for the 4-stars alone, but it feels sort of hollow to me, and I don't mean sound-wise.

Keep it up though, find the soul for your songs, and I'll scout you.