Plese review the song... Thanks

The chords are a little off (Newgrounds wont allow them to be in place, for whatever reason), but here ya go:

Coma, by Flammeus

Intro:
Em C G D Dsus4
Em C G D Dsus4
Em C G D Dsus4
Em C G D Dsus4

Em C G D
Do you ever wonder, what it's like, to live a dream?
Em C G D
Screaming from the top of your lungs, but having, nothing,
to redeem
Em C G D
You do your thing, you lay down, and fall asleep
Em C G D
But fact is, you never know when the reaper's gonna reap.

Em C G D
Aaaaahhhh...

Em C G D
It's like the fire in my heart is long since dead
Em C G D
Can't see a thing but I can hear, every word, that's said
Em C G D
And in the darkest corners, of my mind
Em C G D
It seems my worst decisions is all that I can find.

Em
When my mind starts racing
C
My head fills with haze and I gotta
G D
Gun them all down cause I've got nowhere to run.

Em D Am
Please take these cables out of me
Em D Am
Then just step back and leave me be
Em D Am
Funny how this life-saving machine
Em D Am Am7
Could be the cause of a crime scene.

Em C G D
I'm back beaten forward, and I, I can't find a rose
Em C G D
But them who beat me? Well I've never heard of those
Em C G D
It's a fine example, when you look right down at it
Em C G D
You're asking how do you do? Well I'm far from feeling fit.

Em
Cause when my mind starts racing
C
My head fills with haze and I gotta
G D
Gun them all down cause I've got nowhere to run.

Em D Am
Please take these cables out of me
Em D Am
Then just step back and leave me be
Em D Am
Funny how this life-saving machine
Em D Am Am7
Could be the cause of a crime scene.

Em G D Am
In my head, my head, my head, my head
Em G D Am
In my head, my head, my head, my head
Em G D Am
In my head, my head, my head, my head
Em G D Am
In my head, my head, my head, my head
Em G D Am
*Guitar solo*
Em G D Am
*Guitar solo*
Em G D Am
*Guitar solo*
Em G D Dsus4 Em
*Guitar solo*