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Not a bad start. However, there is tons of room for improvement. One thing I notice, is the entire concept of this song, is overlay after overlay on the same melody line, which is a very neat thing to do, in fact I like to do it sometimes too, and see it quite often in 8-bit tunes. What I recommend is adding a bit more flavor and variety to the piece. See everything is relatively playing at the same pace in here. Around 00:41, instead of that 2 beat progression, you could have upped the pace there... (There is your flavor for that progression). Once your progression hits its peak, what I recommend is a bridge of sorts, and refreshing the song by taking it a different route. For instance, choose a different progression to play on. Anyways, Overall, this is not a bad piece... However it feels unfinished, and definitely could use some polishing. Keep up the good work k!
Thanks for the review. I'll take all that into consideration in future projects. this was my first attempt at 8-bit. :p
Sounds pretty mellow, as well as a tad repetitive.
The kick could be turned down a notch. Otherwise this is alright. :)
thanks for the review!
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