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Normally I wouldn't dislike a song from the sonic the hedgehog series, seeing most of the songs in those games are good quality. However, you didn't improve too much on it, and like DoragonShinzui08 said, the music doesn't mesh well, and your remix makes sounds collide and not mix. You had an idea, and if you work on it a little more my ears would care for it more. 6/10, 3/5