Wow I really like this! I'm actually going to be getting that anime and watching it soon so I can't wait to compare this song to the original!
I really like it, this is something I could listen to all day, and I have added it to my music library! :D
Also for some reason I really like the portion with the slight dissonance, it still feels right and makes the whole song seem to fit all together a little bit more. Keep up the good work, I really enjoy this!