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A song about lines and all the good times of a small Arabian child stuck in the stomach of a whale
Well it was pretty hard to keep the tempo in the intro, especially with the introduction of a snare. You should work on adding some "white noise" instruments during your build ups, it'll hype it up a lot more and make the transitions a bit smoother. I would have definitely liked to hear some open and closed hi-hats and such. In other words, try varying up the drums a little bit. Maybe add some more synths and such. Make sure that you're not red-lining the whole track, too! Look up some tutorials on how to make some basslines and instruments with your VST of choice and then use that knowledge when creating your own.
Thats heaps for your feedback.
Those sounds like awesome ideas.
I'm still getting used to a new VST that i am using.
This song was just really a demo.
But yeah thanks heaps man :D
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