Quite good. Simple melodies, although they are catchy. Cool drums, I would actually call this drum and bass genre because of the emphasis on the percussion.
Thanks for the review on Reminisce.
~X
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I just had fun doing it, I will listen to constructive critics. This is my real first sound using FL studio, I hope it's not too bad :P
edit:
changed some synths, new melody, choir, more automation and other stuff and now my project is kind of a big mess. (I should've been more organized :S)
2nd edit: I added a new perk with a new melody to make the song a little bit more interesting. It's slightly longer and I removed one synth that didn't fit in.
What do you think could be a good title for it?
Have fun!
Fabyy
I like the percussive work, the melody's are decent although they are slightly simplistic. The kick is nice and clean, but the hi-hats need to be a tiny bit less loud. The synths need to be a bit louder though!
You also need to work on your structure - build ups, breakdowns, but all this will come after some more experience.
All in all, for your first song - impressive! :) It does have a lot of potential, so I'll scout you.
Well done :)
Fabyy responds:
Thanks, I'm glad you reviewed (you are one of the reasons why I started doing this ;) )
I revised it today and added a new melody and this will be the final version.
I'll have to watch some YT videos to learn how to do a good breakdown and to improve my buildups.
Altogether I'm actually satisfied with my work :P
I'm looking forward to your album release :D
greets, Fabyy
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