My Deepest Thoughts
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- Score:
- Rated 4.63 / 5 stars
- Plays & Downloads:
- 362 Plays | 17 Downloads
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- Genres:
- Heavy Metal
- classic
- dream
- theater
- orchestra
Author Comments
Hello, good people!
Here I am again to once again upload something that'll probably get 50 views. 51 for the win!
This is a song I made inspired by Dream Theater again and, well, I love it! The vocals are a little low, you can't hear them well (good thing), but the instrumental is really worked on, I spent almost 6 days composing this song.
I hope you guys like it!
Don't forget to review it if you do (or don't, I wanna hear you :D)
See ya!
Lyrics:
[Verso]
Deep inside the darkest place in my head...
I'd demand the sharpness of all the thoughts you have made.
I don't care if all this blood came from me...
Just stay in silence and I won't cut you a gain.
I am sorry, I didn't mean to hurt...
Just don't blame.me already, you haven't seen all the show
And now you now my deepest thoughts.
Are you happy, mister? I do on't think so o at a all...
[Chorus]
This deep thoughts you heard from me
KILL THEM
You're not sup posed to know them
DIE.
This deep thoughts you heard from me
KILL THEM
You're not sup posed to know them
DIE.
[B]
I'm the man who doesn't like friends.
Maybe I could just try to rip off your head...
[Verso 2]
Deep thoughts inside me
please, don't make me cry
I'll just ask you once
Let me be your guide?
Dying threats among with me
shouting curses for you
I won't tell again
Let me just kill you;
[Chorus]
This deep thoughts you heard from me
KILL THEM
You're not sup posed to know them
DIE.
This deep thoughts you heard from me
KILL THEM
Die... I just want you to die.
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Reviews
Rated 3 / 5 stars March 4, 2013
I guess I Am your 51st view the guitar sounds great, but I think if ya had a sound re-work on the vocals, it WILL make a big difference, I could not make out what your saying, and I am sure you have some realty great lyrics.
Hey, first of all, thanks for reviewing!
Yeah, I agree with you, the vocal needs a "re-work". In fact, the problem is this: I can't sing. Although I have a good tuning, I really don't have any techniques. It sucks, because working on tuning is easy, but working on techniques and also my timbre is REALLY not.
About the lyrics, I'll put them at the description :D
Again, thanks for reviewing!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 4, 2013
I can really hear the influence. The understated bass, the uncanny mood, clear technical lead guitar, the incongruous vocals--all there.
Oh, c'mon, it's not an understated bass, I worked really hard on it! Seriously! Hahaha
I think it's a little low, though.
But yeah, Dream Theater is one of my favorite band so I love making songs based on their (geniality) work.
Thanks for reviewing! See Ya!