Score: 8
"what i think will make this song better..."
date: May 2, 2009
First at 0:45 add a alarm that rises and lowers at a pace that you see fit that will be noticeable to EVERYONE.
Between 0:07 and 0:10 should be someone evil or something laughing.
Then get :34... copy paste it right after 1:29...
Everything else is just like how I dreamed of it!!!
great ****ing song...
I wish i could make my own =(