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Date
03/02/2013
File Info
Song
6.6 MB
4 min 48 sec
Score
4.22 / 5.00

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Rated 4.22 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Electronic - Ambient
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Author Comments

Here it is - my first upload.

7 synths, 120 bpm, 2-3 weeks of labor.

This is my first audio submission, so I would appreciate if you could leave some feedback on what you think is flawed, good, needs improvement on, and so on. Constructive criticism will be appreciated!

Reviews


Alvar123Alvar123

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

IT gets loud in the middle of song. but still good.


AppleJack responds:

I had some issues with that, but thanks for pointing that out!


NGKFlowerNGKFlower

Rated 5 / 5 stars

very calming. i love it.


AppleJack responds:

thanks :)


DJ-DasCoolDJ-DasCool

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Beautiful. This right here is a gentle and calming song.


AppleJack responds:

Thanks man!


MaartenCMaartenC

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's pretty good.

120bpm isn't much picked these days, except by most ambient artists, which is actually the genre I'd put this in, to be honest.
Then, I like the synths and background here, especially the background. It reminds me of my favorite ambient artist, Solar Fields. They also use similar effects and instruments.

I would change the lengths and starts of a lot of tones though, since your synth and your background don't seem in sync, or at least out of rhythm.

I have nothing against the flow of the audio. On the contrary, I actually love it. You use the kind of builds and drops that I like to hear in ambient. Well done at that.

Overall, I'd say a 6/10 (due to the chaotic sound) for the first half and a 8/10 for the second half.

You don't want to change any of the instruments, but I want you to take a good look at the timing of everything. It's hard to place it right, but with a good sense of music (if you can call it that), you can make it happen.


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AppleJack responds:

I was having trouble choosing the genre for this, but now looking at your review, i guess it is ambient.

I also felt the timing through out the piece was a bit off, and i really didnt know what to do. Electronic music really does demand that every single beat and sound HAS to be in place, or else the piece would be screwed over, even a little bit, like in this piece.

I really enjoyed the synths in this piece as well, and i am hoping for the usage of them in the (possible) future compositions.

I guess i have to work on positioning the synths and notes better. this review is REALLY appreciated. Thank you so much for your time!


Fivestar811Fivestar811

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nice! I could use this to calm myself down!


AppleJack responds:

nice! thanks for reviewing