Machine Planet
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- Score:
- Rated 4.65 / 5 stars
- Plays & Downloads:
- 4,087 Plays | 298 Downloads
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- Genres:
- Industrial
- machine
- bass
- industrial
- gothic
Author Comments
After receiving some short but directive criticism, as well as some of my own criticism... I have reworked the song a bit, lowered the snare's volume a bit, and raised the tone slightly, to hopefully reduce the snare being so 'heavy' and kind of blend in to the song a bit better. Added some additional vocal tracks, to add 'power' to the verses. Increased volumes on vocals, as well as reworking the outro completely. I just didn't like the 'club feel' outro for Machine Planet, and was more of a placeholder originally, that and it was pretty much taken from another song of mine, 'Pulse'.
Anyways... Enjoy the song, and give me some more feedback and criticism if you'd like! However, I do not plan on tweaking this any further for I can continue on some new projects. Thanks so much for listening!
lyrics...
Welcome to the machine planet
Where all your truths are lies
Consuming all their production
Only leads to this subduction
Say goodbye to your will
Say farewell to your feelings
Although you did not need these anyway
(Welcome to this perfect world)
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Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars 13 days ago
Slenderman loved your intro!!
Just give him 20 dollars?
Rated 5 / 5 stars March 24, 2013
Naarwhaalss naaarwhaalss. Rly gud m8
Haha, good o' weebl...
Fair enough. Thanks bud!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 22, 2013
Nice, I love my Industrial goth music haha, but anyways the song was really great and now I am gonna go and check out some of your other stuff. Keep up the good work ;D
Great, man! I really appreciate it, though I warn you, my other songs aren't so much like this one. Most of the ones on here are actually from 2011 and 2012!
Thanks again man!
Rated 3 / 5 stars March 21, 2013
The intro was killer !!! However the rest of the song didn't satisfy the build of the awesome intro. And the auto tuned lyrics in my opinion were just bad and uncomplimentary. Also the rest of the song slowly goes down hill from there. Perhaps I wouldn't be so hard on this if the intro didn't set the standard.
These aren't the droids you're looking for.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars March 18, 2013
amazing work may i please use this track for a project I'm working on? you will receive full credit.
Sounds awesome.
The answer is: Yes.