sweet

i like it!! n_n

I GOT THE PERECT IDEA

At the beginning when you sont hear anything, add a a the sound a of the wind blowing, with the creak of an old swing set, that will set the moddy, then just keep that scary ambiance thing going for the song

i would give it more than a 10

well i dont know to make music but you are the best musician i ever heard well your the 2 place for my well rock still rocks for me but you are still very good ive heard and the ohter submissions keep up the good work :)

WOW UR GOOD..

nice..... sry im not good at judging goth musicc but ur pretty good at thease sounds. keep it up pls make full or add more sounds i mean..

freakin' awsome

Maybe you could throw in some quick tempo violin/strings beats between the beggining and the drums, and let it continue throughout about the whole song. That'll do for me. Now go out there and make me proud... please? :'