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Feb 7, 2013 | 2:11 AM EST
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3.1 MB
1 min 23 sec
3.07 / 5.00

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Rated 3.07 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

I wrote this short piece the other day, and after an hour or so of sitting on it with no ideas of where to take it, I decided to distort everything and use it as some kind of intro (or outro?) to the rest of a hypothetical song.

I have uploaded to NG because I am looking for ideas of where to take the song from here. If you have any ideas/feedback to give then I would be super thankful!



Rated 4 / 5 stars


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jakeghost responds:

Thanks, cheesywombat10!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dude. I dig this. wish I wrote it I like it that much. Loving your voice too, I think if you really want to expand on this you may only need to write about 30 to 45 seconds more, even at the current length its extremely effective. Reminds me of the shorter songs off of Pink Floyd's The Wall such as Thin Ice which is also very short. Looking forward to hearing more from you.

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jakeghost responds:

Wow glad you really like it!! Thanks for the review. And for reminding me that art doesn't have to have a time limit or anything, woohoo to bands like Pink Floyd. Thanks again!


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Insipid lyrics. The singing is unfit, it mars the melody. Either rewrite it or remove.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Love your voice, reminds me of the singer of the cruxshadows.

This low fi piano affair sounds like the intro to an agressive powerpop ballad.

Think audioslave meets monster magnet.

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jakeghost responds:

Thanks a lot for the comment- I am interested to listen to those bands you mentioned and to try writing a powerpop ballad now!