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Could you tell me how to correct this so I can improve my skills.
I like the way it starts off. I also like how it goes from piano to synth. Well you did combinations as well. Hmm, the only way i can suggest you to improve this is to work on your mixing =). Its a good to have a lead, and have that lead be the most heard. For example, if you want the bass to lead, you make that slightly louder than everything else.
Its really hard for me to explain it, but it comes through experience.
Keep it up!
Thanks a lot! There is so much to learn and your advice was helpful.
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