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Already know what next should be.
Sobriety is clarity.
So hire them and fire me.
Yeah buy me, condemn me and hopefully wreck me.
What can I say?
This is a word from 'generation what now?'
We're all here we just don't know how.
Do you ever feel like you wish you were dead?
Broken record in my head.
Already know what everyone buys.
With their he said she said lies.
Pulling wings and still time flies.
Yeah, buy me, condemn me and hopefully sell me.
My shelter. My home. I walk to. Alone.
Walk to. Walk to. I want to. Alone.
Do you ever feel like the comfort in waiting is due to the fact that no one is listening?
My shelter is gone. I walk on alone.
I want to. Walk to. Walk to. Alone.
The music is good and the lyrics inspired...
But! This sounds like it was recorded in the distance (or maybe with a microphone inside a cardboard box)... Now, don't take this as me being harsh. I'm just saying you should invest in a better quality microphone, or in post-recording voice brush-ups...
Other than that you got some really great potential here!
Thanks man, and you're absolutely right. I record with a handheld camera. I appreciate the compliments. Thank you.
A little bit of clean up would be of huge benefit to this track, but even beneath that it sounds really great.
I agree with both statements.
I think this is very grungy I wouldn't worry about its placement (then again in my opinion Marilyn Mansion writes metal-pop songs) but that's just me. Hey man I really like this song, I love the way you scream into "what can I say" its a real attention grabber. Other than quality which is obviously that of a demo to give us an idea of what it sounds like I think this song could benefit a lot from being about a minute shorter.
I hate it when people say this about my own music but if you brought the ending in at about a minute sooner you could still keep your bridge while keeping your audience from getting bored because 5 minutes can really be pushing it for most people. I look forward to hearing a higher quality version. But really cool song over all man.
Thanks man, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Stay tuned for future uploads.
You should get this dope shit recorded in better quality. Not to good though. I hate the to clean sounding grunge some people throw around. So yeah, polish this gem til it shines! But not till it bleeds.
You are right about it not being all that grungy. I just thought the lyrics sounded jaded. I should put this track under general rock. Check out my other stuff if you like. Thank you for your comment!
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