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Every time I see your face
It makes me feel like I'm going insane
Whenever someone says your name
All I hear is the sound of pain
You know I like to play my games
Oh I know that you think your a saint
I lost my mind just hours ago
There's nothing you can do to keep me in your control
I don't even really know you
And I already know that I hate you
Every single thing you say
Makes me want to puke
I never really got to know you
But I always knew that I could never love you
So whats in it for me
If its only you that I lose
You just need someone to blame
After all you just want a break
But when you speak all I hear is shit
So cut my hair and call me a hypocrite
Antagonize me to the end
You play dumb but I pretend
We lost our minds just hours ago
And if I say here any longer
I think I'm gonna explode
Pretty good stuff man! You might wanna change the lyrics a bit. Sometimes they just don't really follow the melody and you have a lot of unnecessary filler words. Simplify a bit. The less words you use the better. Other than that its got good music and you've got a good voice.
Thanks man. Yes I've often thought that about the lyrics as well particularly on the verses. Glad to hear you liked it thanks for taking a listen!
Idk why this song has such a low rating. I actually really like it. The lead guitar tones needs a little bit of work, and the mix and production needs some work, but I love the way the song is written. The song just screams punk to me, nicely done. 4/5.
Thank you! I wrote this song in my head while I was working at an amusement park. Yup, this one is on my list of songs to re-record in a real studio (not the basement or bedroom) I'm glad you liked the writing! Its really a demo so I'm happy to know someone is able to listen to it as a song more than a production. But ultimately I need both, anyway thanks again man!
This is a great song! reminds me of the distillers and I agree with Jonicorn, wish the recording could be a bit better. Awesome song though.
Thank you very much! Yes I agree with you both, right now it almost sounds like a live recording but in reality in took me about 10 or 15 hours because this was one of my first projects with vocals. Glad to hear you liked it man, thanks!
Kinda catchy tune, but the recording isnt really great. Good enough for a demo though.
And the lyrics are a bit juvenile-
Record it again but with higher quality, I'm thinking "Death From Above 1979" and or "The white Stripes".
Your the singer? Great vocals, cool and kinda original voice.
Thank you. Yes I am the singer and the everything else guy as well (except the drums were loops) I'm rather new to recording my voice and acoustics are tricky business. Yes I agree that it needs redoing, I'm actually happy to hear someone else say that, as I'm often accused of being a perfectionist and I've been thinking I would like to re-do this one for a while.
thanks for listening man I really appreciate it!
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