The mixing is not so good, especially the volume of the instruments used. There is a feeling that the cymbals and the melody are separate entities. But the composition (chords/melody) is really great. There is really an epic ending feel for some kind of legend.

It's got a nice melody but you really need to polish it a lot more. You are hitting every note as hard as possible and not blending between notes at all... Even the choir sounds absolutely mechanical.